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You have the next great idea, but is it really great? This is the place to post your logline or pitch, put it out there and let our residents and experts tell you what they think.
![Dave Gilleand](/defaultthumbs/avatar13.webp)
A desperate office worker trades his life for the body and power of his wealthy, cutthroat boss, only to discover that the dream life he envied comes with unexpected consequences—and a haunting reminder of the life he left behind.
![Kevin Murphy](/medthumbs/9224-452.webp)
After a science experiment catapults four high school nerds 80,000 light-years across the galaxy, they must survive hostile aliens, evade a relentless bounty hunter and reach an ancient intergalactic gate before it vanishes, trapping them forever.
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![Jed Power](/medthumbs/12801-622.webp)
I am writing to share with you an exciting and heartwarming project that I believe has the potential to captivate audiences and make a significant impact in the world of television.Allow me to introduce you to "A Stroke of Luck," a 30-minute TV Dramedy that combines humor, resilience, and the enduring strength of the human spirit. Inspired by my own Stroke Journey, this series is a celebration of life, friendship, and the unexpected journeys that arise when life takes an unforeseen turn.At the heart of "A Stroke of Luck" is Jack Murphy, an already semi-successful novelist who, following a debilitating stroke, finds himself suddenly navigating the challenges of partial paralysis, cognitive hurdles, and a loss of interest in writing and life itself. Within the walls of Saunders Rehab Hospital, he forms an unbreakable bond with fellow patients, Dona, Martha, and Fred. Together they embark on a journey of rediscovery, mischief, and laughter.What sets "A Stroke of Luck" apart is its unique perspective on the rehabilitation process. Rather than focusing solely on the medical aspects, our series delves into the lives of the patients themselves. It turns the classic dynamic of
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![Ben Cahan](/medthumbs/17-370.webp)
https://www.talentville.com/barandgrill/17
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Logline/Pitch Feedback
You have the next great idea, but is it really great? This is the place to post your logline or pitch, put it out there and let our residents and experts tell you what they think.;
![Michael Elliott](/medthumbs/12925-538.webp)
Otherwise, awesome! :)
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