Talentville Coverage for MUTATION - Red Rain - Episode #101

by Ben Cahan

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Overall, this teleplay is off to a great start. However, the plot itself needs to be further developed, especially in terms of developing Roger's character better so the twist in his arc is not so out of left field. The character driven story is encouraging as sustaining a television series just on the element of a mutant outbreak is untenable. While the story is compelling, engaging, and entertaining, the script's biggest challenge it has will be attracting a strong enough following without the pre-awareness of a popular source material.

Overall, this teleplay is off to a great start. However, the plot itself needs to be further developed, especially in terms of developing Roger's character better so the twist in his arc is not so out of left field. The character driven story is encouraging as sustaining a television series just on the element of a mutant outbreak is untenable. While the story is compelling, engaging, and entertaining, the script's biggest challenge it has will be attracting a strong enough following without the pre-awareness of a popular source material.

Ben Cahan

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Again, welcome to town.

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