Talentville Mini-Coverage for Haloes on the Moon

by Ben Cahan

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Overall this script is an ambitious yet unsatisfying tale. There are some imaginative elements here but they’re not integrated into the narrative with enough depth, creativity, or strong moments...this script has all the raw materials for an interesting movie however the commercial potential of an inward looking western drama does not portend to do well at the box office. By placing this in a similar setting thematically, such as modern day Appalachia, or another rural, isolated setting would open up the possibility of making this story appealing to a wider audience.

Overall this script is an ambitious yet unsatisfying tale. There are some imaginative elements here but they’re not integrated into the narrative with enough depth, creativity, or strong moments...this script has all the raw materials for an interesting movie however the commercial potential of an inward looking western drama does not portend to do well at the box office. By placing this in a similar setting thematically, such as modern day Appalachia, or another rural, isolated setting would open up the possibility of making this story appealing to a wider audience.

Ben Cahan

Screenwriter • Producer • Manager

I am the Founder and CEO of Talentville, Inc. and I want to welcome all our members to the city I am building. In 1989, I created and co-founded Final Draft, the worldwide leader in screenwriting software.

With Talentville I hope to create an entirely new market for aspiring screenwriters to not only improve their skills and network with other writers, but also to provide a gateway to reach and interact with industry professionals, from agents and managers to producers and production executives.

Feel free to contact me with any feedback or suggestions that you may have for the site.

Again, welcome to town.

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