The Lowrie Gang has incredible promise and many elements are working extremely well. There is an obvious respect for the subject matter and the main characters on the Lowrie side. The romance between Henry Berry and Rhoda is strong. The setting/environment of the overall script is also strong and tangible – the woods and swamps of North Carolina, the impoverished homesteads and cabins, the wartorn feeling we get is there. The chronological trajectory of the story works and I feel there is no need to stray from that in the case of this already interesting story with its own mysterious twists and turns which you obviously work with and appreciate.