PARABELLUM

by Ian White

Partial Script, 27 pages
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Here are the first 20 or so pages of one of my new plays. I'm interested to hear whether you like it enough to want more. Is it gripping? I'm particularly interested in feedback from those who previously read "AMARIS". But I'm happy to hear any constructive criticism. Thanks.
I'm aware the opening monologue is too long, but I'm not focusing on that just now.

PARABELLUM

Partial Script , 14 pages

Uploaded: Jan 22, 2018

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